Final (final!) Edit

The changes we have made are the following:

- Transition from conversation into next shot
- Production names to just 'Peephole Production'
- Zoomed in on the 'Peephole' credit to exclude the thumb from the shot

- Sophie

Recent Film Changes

Today, I changed the credits from the producer names;
Jo Peplow-Revell, Sophie Tindall & Hazel Clifton
to just "Peephole Productions". As this is the name of our group and also our institution, it is better than having all three of our names as this isn't realistic to what you would see in a real film. I have also edited the credit screen at the end, so the hand is barely showing and the credit and the flame fills the screen more, giving it an overall better look as it is now framed properly. We will upload this soon.
- Sophie

Final Gantt Chart

Final Gantt-Chart

This is to see how we decided who did what for filming, editing and re-shooting. All of the inputs were pretty equal.

Final Script

Scene 1

Mr Jones gets out of the car, then flicks to Katie watching through school gates.

Scene 2

Mr Jones’s kitchen, conversation between Mr Jones and his friend.

Friend: So how’ve you been?

Mr Jones: Not so good actually.

Friend: Why what’s the matter?

Mr Jones: I think im being followed.

Friend: Followed, followed by who?

Mr Jones: I don’t know mate.

Friend: But you’ve got a wife and kids.

Mr Jones: I dunno.

Scene 3

Classroom,

Mr Jones: (puts work done on table and walks off) Well done Katie

Scene 4

Picture wall

Scene 5

Muddy pathway, Mr Jones walks down the muddy pathway as Katie is seen following behind him.

Scene 6

Katie’s bedroom,

Katie: (door slams) Why are you doing this? To me, why are you doing this? We can run away together, we can run! Just stop playing with me, please, just stop f**cking playing!

(sobbing) I love you.

Scene 7

Picture wall

Scene 8

Classroom,

Mr Jones: And the star pupil of the week is... Catherine....Jasmine.....Hannah.

Scene 9

Picture wall

Scene 10

Katie’s bedroom,

Katie: Now do you love me?

Scene 11

Katie’s bedroom, Katie holding paper saying ‘Peephole’

This is the final script, there is quite a lot of dialogue in the first two minutes of our film, this is because more dialogue makes our storyline easier to understand.

Jo

Institution Logo

As our institution and film are called 'Peephole', we wanted an image which would relate to the name 'Peephole', also with the idea of stalking we thought it would be good to have a picture of someone looking through something.

On Google we found this image (Left)

We thought this image was brilliant because it could relate to being stalked because of the eye staring through the Peephole.
However we wanted to make the logo more creepy so it was clear it was for a horror movie, so we adapted it. We imported the original image into a free editing programme called 'Picnix'. In this programme we changed the image to black and white and made the eye bright green. We decided to use green as it symbolises jealousy, which is the main theme in our film.
We chose to make the writing white because it stands out from the dull grey of the peephole image, and also to reflect the innocence of youth.
We added an effect on Adobe Premier Elements called 'Lens Flare' as we thought this made our film look professional.



This is our final edit of our logo.





The website that the image came from was -http://circlingmyhead.blogspot.com/2009/02/dreams-sponsored-by-letter-k.html


Inputs from all group members.