Final Script

Scene 1

Mr Jones gets out of the car, then flicks to Katie watching through school gates.

Scene 2

Mr Jones’s kitchen, conversation between Mr Jones and his friend.

Friend: So how’ve you been?

Mr Jones: Not so good actually.

Friend: Why what’s the matter?

Mr Jones: I think im being followed.

Friend: Followed, followed by who?

Mr Jones: I don’t know mate.

Friend: But you’ve got a wife and kids.

Mr Jones: I dunno.

Scene 3

Classroom,

Mr Jones: (puts work done on table and walks off) Well done Katie

Scene 4

Picture wall

Scene 5

Muddy pathway, Mr Jones walks down the muddy pathway as Katie is seen following behind him.

Scene 6

Katie’s bedroom,

Katie: (door slams) Why are you doing this? To me, why are you doing this? We can run away together, we can run! Just stop playing with me, please, just stop f**cking playing!

(sobbing) I love you.

Scene 7

Picture wall

Scene 8

Classroom,

Mr Jones: And the star pupil of the week is... Catherine....Jasmine.....Hannah.

Scene 9

Picture wall

Scene 10

Katie’s bedroom,

Katie: Now do you love me?

Scene 11

Katie’s bedroom, Katie holding paper saying ‘Peephole’

This is the final script, there is quite a lot of dialogue in the first two minutes of our film, this is because more dialogue makes our storyline easier to understand.

Jo