This is our rough cut of 'Peephole'. The feedback we recieved from our subject teacher was as follows:
- The title of the film needs to appear earlier
- Your titles need to be consistantly placed
- The stalker chasing her is unbelievable - she is too close!
- It's like the film has already ended, change the end.
Some general feedback we recieved was:
- "I like the opening! Your transitions work well, but your titles are not consistent." - Aged 17
- "She is very close to her with the knife, I think the other girl might notice if she was that close and turn around." - Aged 19
- "Scary!" - Aged 11
We will now make the changes asked of us to improve our opening two minutes.
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